Friday, 3 June 2011

The Other Woman

I don't generally write haiku, though they have their own beauty and I think it would be a really useful exercise in pithiness.  Anyhow, here's one I prepared earlier:


The other woman?
I'm not interested enough
to write a poem.





7 comments:

  1. very good. I instantly went to Bitcherel, which is very different in all sorts of ways (I prefer your approach) http://www.bloodaxebooks.com/poemsample7.asp

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  2. He who steals my love
    steals trash but then woe alas
    she was treasure then

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  3. I don't know Bitcherel but it sounds great! Will investigate 'pon my return from Porlock.

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  4. what other woman?
    there is no other woman
    i was down the pub

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  5. Ah, Anonymous
    You're clearly not my ex-spouse,
    that spoilt, selfish louse.

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  6. in secret i stare
    as if from a blind window
    to another's house

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